this is an attempt to help out Dennis Field with a song . I hope you like and can maybe use some of the ideas
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just another fast food dinner,
I cant't tell you just how much I miss you ,
coffee from a paper cup
got you on my mind,
and in the moment that I kiss your face ,
can we forget about the time and space ,
between us now ,
won't fast forever,
I'm up in the clouds
but I'm coming down
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Nathan,
Thank you for this! This really helped I really liked how you slowed it down more and focussed on the emotion. This really gives me hope and helped jar some ideas. I’ll keep playing with this and get something re-posted.
This is the type of stuff that makes Frettie fun and valuable! Who would have thought I’d be able to collaborate with you from right here in Ohio?
So others can see full context, I posted a link to your version to the original version here:
http://frettie.com/track_detail/677
Thanks for thanking the time.
July 07, 2014
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Dennis Field
Nathan,
Thank you for this! This really helped I really liked how you slowed it down more and focussed on the emotion. This really gives me hope and helped jar some ideas. I’ll keep playing with this and get something re-posted.
This is the type of stuff that makes Frettie fun and valuable! Who would have thought I’d be able to collaborate with you from right here in Ohio?
So others can see full context, I posted a link to your version to the original version here:
http://frettie.com/track_detail/677
Thanks for thanking the time.
July 07, 2014
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