Wrote this song with Christine Joy and Heather Platania in a Miranda Lambert or Ashely McBride style. Very excited to get this female powerhouse song out there.
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Um,I think you need to decide is the relationship over? She says his indifference caused the marriage to collapse and ashes are buried on sacred ground. Sounds like she wants him out . So either remake it into a song about (not burning the house) and making a new start, or about telling him to move out. The verse about something’s gotta change with him seems like you just backtracked and chickened out. My .02
March 13, 2026
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Robert Boog
Um,I think you need to decide is the relationship over? She says his indifference caused the marriage to collapse and ashes are buried on sacred ground. Sounds like she wants him out . So either remake it into a song about (not burning the house) and making a new start, or about telling him to move out. The verse about something’s gotta change with him seems like you just backtracked and chickened out. My .02
March 13, 2026
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