I guy wishing an ex was still devastated they broke up, but realizing reality at the same time.
I've had this song put on hold several times, but has not been cut yet. What can I do to take it to the next level?
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Verse I
I Wish she was in a Broadway bar
Tucked back in a booth and taking it hard
Wish she was sitting there nursing whiskey neat
Trying to quit thinking bout how good we use to be
Verse 2
Wish she was out in Memphis feeling blue
Wanting back mister you know, know who
If I had it my way she'd be sitting some place
All alone in this volunteer state
Pre Chorus
Yea Somewhere in Tennessee
Missing me
That's where I wish she'd be
But probably
Chorus
She's out in the keys living her best life
Watching sunsets and sipping Mai Tai's
Midnight kissing on another guy
One That her daddy actually likes
Yeah She's probably picking out venues
For her wedding coming up next June
She probably ain't thinking bout me a lick
But I still like to think she is
Yeah I still like to think she is
Verse 3
Wish she was sippin red wine
Eating ice cream out the tub tonight
Heart broke at her mama's house telling her how
She wish I'd just come on back home now
Pre Chorus
Yea Somewhere in Tennessee
Missing me
That's where I wish she'd be
But probably
Chorus
She's out in the keys living her best life
Watching sunsets and sipping Mai Tai's
Midnight kissing on another guy
One That her daddy actually likes
Yeah She's probably picking out venues
For her wedding coming up next June
She probably ain't thinking bout me a lick
But I still like to think she is
Yeah I still like to think she is
Pre Chorus
Yea Somewhere in Tennessee
Missing me
That's where I wish she'd be
But probably
Chorus
She's out in the keys living her best life
Watching sunsets and sipping Mai Tai's
Midnight kissing on another guy
One That her daddy actually likes
Yeah She's probably picking out venues
For her wedding coming up next June
She probably ain't thinking bout me a lick
But I still like to think she is
Yeah I still like to think she is
Outro
She's probably turned the page to the next chapter
Probably out there living her happy ever after
Probably ain't thinking bout me
But I still like to think she is
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