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This is a country pop song about a guy telling a girl how good she looks and they gotta redirect where there going because shes looking so good he needs to get her to the bed room to get it on.
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Verse 1
Yeah I know we were supposed to go downtown
Meet our friends laugh and have a few rounds
But looking at you in that red dress now
Only thing I can think about
Chorus
We gonna need a detour
To your front porch
To ya bed where ya dress
Can hit the hardwood floor
Cuz i can't take it no more
Seeing you up in this ford
Got the pedal to the floor
We gonna need a detour
Verse 2
I'm sorry but our friends are gonna have to wait
Gonna be the couple fashionably late
Not because you were reapplying mascara
But because I can't keep my hands off ya
Chorus
We gonna need a detour
To your front porch
To ya bed where ya dress
Can hit the hardwood floor
Cuz i can't take it no more
Seeing you up in this ford
Got the pedal to the floor
We gonna need a detour
Bridge
Will get to the bar
Will have a few drinks
But first things first
Baby
Chorus
We gonna need a detour
To your front porch
To ya bed where ya dress
Can hit the hardwood floor
Cuz i can't take it no more
Seeing you up in this ford
Got the pedal to the floor
We gonna need a detour
Outro
When ya looking like that
And got my heart beating like this
Yea I'ma need a map or
A little back road detour
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