A Beatles-esque ballad about hazy brain activity due to the anger of a recent break-up.
I wrote, performed, recorded, and mixed everything so any and all feedback is greatly appreciated.
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Strange way to start the day...
I snuffed a rainbow, and the sky lay waste.
Clouds swelled and rendered the whole world gray.
What did you say?
Strange way to see your face...
Arm in arm with a lad in plaid on your way back to his place.
We were changing everyday - terrified to make a mistake.
You've found your way.
I wish you both the best
Apathy and carelessness.
I wish you both the best.
I did not intend to digress....
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Great music. First thing I thought was Beatles (before I read what you wrote). Love the keyboard work. Dude! 
April 24, 2014
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Charlie Katt
Great music. First thing I thought was Beatles (before I read what you wrote). Love the keyboard work. Dude!
April 24, 2014