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Verse 1:
You walk in and there’s no more butterflies
And your smile’s no longer knocking me out of my boots
Always making me wonder if we still belong together
Said me not ever
Verse 2:
You’re pulling me a little bit too close
Got your arms wrapping around me a little too tight
I’m not tasting the fire on your lips like I remember
Said me not ever
Chorus:
Not ever could I fool myself
Thinking maybe somebody else is gonna touch me the way that you do
Not ever could I stop my heart
From setting off a million sparks every night when I’m kissing you
One day I’m gonna find somebody who’ll love me better
Said me not ever
Verse 3:
Waking up with you still in my arms
Always making it so easy leaving this bed
Got a love burning out like a pile of smoldering embers
Said me not ever
Chorus:
Not ever could I fool myself
Thinking maybe somebody else is gonna touch me the way that you do
Not ever could I stop my heart
From setting off a million sparks every night when I’m kissing you
One day I’m gonna find somebody who’ll love me better
Said me not ever
Bridge:
The truth of the matter is
You’re my spending forever with
You’re my wake me up at sunrise
First look into your blue eyes
And knowing I’ve got a new day to love you again
Copyright 2024 by Allan M. Rosensweig
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This is clever and well crafted. Has an Ed Sheeran vibe to it. Well done
January 18, 2025
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Tray Price
This is clever and well crafted. Has an Ed Sheeran vibe to it. Well done
January 18, 2025
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