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Broken House (country)

Tray Price

October 09, 2024

Genre: Pop

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My original lyrics set to AI generated music and vocals for scratch demo purposes. Playing on the words “the Ring” (video doorbell vs actual ring) and “Broken House” as a play on “open house” to a breaking up home

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Broken House (country)

Written by Tray Price

Please dont try to sell me
your lies
The realtor’s posting the list’n
tonight
It's all there on video
You cant hide from the truth
I've already started packing
The first showing’s tomorrow
at noon


Welcome to our broken house
Yea the flooring is brand new
The paint was all refreshed
In the last year or two
The roof has good shingles
These walls hold make believe
memories
With a strong enough offer
I'll throw in the ring


It's crazy what’s captured
in the shade of night
When you think no one's looking
while you're not doing right
I watched you go to her house,
then sneak back into ours
I sure hope she is worth it,
You’ll be hearin’ from my lawyer


Welcome to our broken house
Yea the flooring is brand new
The paint was all refreshed
In the last year or two
The roof has good shingles
These walls hold make believe
memories
With a strong enough offer
I'll throw in the ring


I didn't have a hand in this,
you brought it on us both
I'm moving back to Arkansas,
you can move in across the road


Welcome to our broken house
Yea the flooring is brand new
The paint was all refreshed
In the last year or two
The roof has good shingles
These walls hold make believe
memories
With a strong enough offer
I'll throw in the ring

Yeah with a strong enough offer
I’ll throw in the ring


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