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Let It Be Amazing (revised)

Jamie Davis

March 25, 2014

Genre: Pop

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Same story as the other version with some refined lyrics and key change to lift it up a bit.Got some great input from other members and also from Barbara Cloyd, which I implemented in this version and would love to hear your thoughts?

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Does the key change work? Are the lyrical refinements effective? Any other improvements? Thanks all!!!



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Let It Be Amazing (revised)

Written by Jamie Davis

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You were sittin' there
And I was sittin' there
On that day that we first met
When we couldn't know
All the things we'd say
And all the things we'd do
And all the things we'd feel
We couldn't know

Someday we'd be so in love that everyone could see
Our souls all tangled up as one So beautiful and free
As we, let it be
Let it be amazing
Let it be
Let it be amazing

We were torn apart
When I broke your gentle heart
‘Cause I made my mistakes
So you couldn't stay
And all the things we said
And all the things we did
And all the things we felt
But you couldn't stay

I would lie awake at night and dream that someday you'd come back
I'd stumble through the day and pray I'd have a chance to ask

ADE
Can you let it be?
Let it be amazing?
Let it be
Let it be amazing

Now you're sittin' here
And I am sittin' here, and
Though the clouds have cleared
We cannot guess
All the things we'll say
Or all the things we'll do
Or all the things we'll feel
So we have to trust
The love that we were handed girl
It came from up on high
Our tangled souls and melted hearts are the very reasons why we should

Let it be
Let it be amazing
Let it be
Let it be amazing

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