The story behind this song is in 2023, I experienced a panic attack during the 3rd Christmas Eve gathering. I found myself hyping myself up with my friend by doing push-ups and then whispering Holy Spirit, you never gave me a timid spirit, please help me get through this gathering. I know I've prayed God please help me to experience what breaks your heart and I knew I needed to push through. So glad I did say that quick prayer.
Do you think I should extend verse 2 like verse 1? Also should I add a bridge?
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Verse 1
Just the other night
Breathing through a fear that cripple me
Trying to think right, fighting the good fight
But sadly I’ve failed regretfully
In my head, all the lies take charge like a disease
Telling me to go hide, Your not worth the time
Oh God, have you forgotten me?
Pre Chorus
I whisper underneath my breath
Holy Spirit please come help me
Chorus
He said call onto me
Oh, My love best believe
I hear you and I’m right here with you
Always
Bring those thoughts to it’s knees
I’m the God of your needs
My love will hold you now and always
Trust and just Believe
Verse 2
Step by step
We have journeyed through long narrow roads
Some we did alright, others we failed at
Keeping our eyes on heaven’s goal
Pre-Chorus (Working on )
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Chorus
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This is a well writren song. Great lyrics you are a good singer. Maybe a bridge.
Write one and see what you think. This song is a keeper. Suggest you get it recorded . Might try Pearl Snap studio Nashville on line. They are really good and pretty reasonable priced.
July 10, 2024
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David Pellegrini
This is a well writren song. Great lyrics you are a good singer. Maybe a bridge.
Write one and see what you think. This song is a keeper. Suggest you get it recorded . Might try Pearl Snap studio Nashville on line. They are really good and pretty reasonable priced.
July 10, 2024
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