Still working on the title of this song but the theme is about how Jesus never changes. It doesn't matter whether we're in Spring (season for planting), Summer(growing/hidden), Fall (harvesting), or winter (hibernation) Jesus never changes.
I'd love for help in picking a title and just feedback lyrics.
Switching lanes while the months go by
or as the months go by
There’s s never a reason not to trust your call
or no reason not to trust your call
instead of justifying all life’s mystery’s
maybe
is your masterpiece, or your creation your masterpiece. . I really like your lyrics. cool song
September 21, 2023
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Title: Untitled
Writers: Naomie
Verse 1
Life is like crusin down the turnpike
Switching lanes just like the months gone by
What you’ve shown me
Is the beauty in the scenery
Justifying all life’s mysteries
PC
You’re here in all seasons
From winter thru fall
Can’t find a reason to not
Trust your call
Though days change like colors on leaves,
I can bank on just one thing
Chorus
Jesus you’re wonderful
You remain the same
No matter the highs
No matter the lows
You remain the same
Verse 2
Spring is like planting little mustard seeds
Which proceeds to sprout in summer heat
What you don’t know
Is the seeds contains these hidden dreams
Whichs awaits for fall to breakfree
PC
You’re here in all seasons
From winter thru fall
Can’t find a reason tonot
Trust your call
Though the days change life colors on leaves in fall,
I can bank on your goodness
Chorus
Jesus you’re wonderful
You remain the same
No matter the highs
No matterthe lows
You remain the same
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Might be called remain the same.
You could do the chorus.
Just a suggestion
You remain the same
No matter the highs
No matter the lows
Jesus you’re wonderful
You remain the same
Jesus you remain the same
September 21, 2023
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Switching lanes while the months go by
or as the months go by
There’s s never a reason not to trust your call
or no reason not to trust your call
instead of justifying all life’s mystery’s
maybe
is your masterpiece, or your creation your masterpiece. . I really like your lyrics. cool song
September 21, 2023
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David Pellegrini
Might be called remain the same.
You could do the chorus.
Just a suggestion
You remain the same
No matter the highs
No matter the lows
Jesus you’re wonderful
You remain the same
Jesus you remain the same
September 21, 2023
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