Just a song about a girl who is good at saying goodbye to various boyfriends.
Feedback is always welcome, lay it on me I can take it
I hope to hear some of your music and thanks for sharing my music. Keep on writing
October 14, 2023
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Verse I (Male Verse)
They say if you kiss a wound, it will always heal
So, let me kiss the one inside you, undo how I made you feel
They say my words cut you, so deep inside
I wish I could tak’em back, you know that’s why
Chorus Male & Female)
I wanna kiss your lips, breathe on your shoulders
Kiss you on your skin, all over
I wanna let you know, so come a little closer
I don’t want to lose you to words not spoken sober
So, let my lips sink in through every part, I want to kiss your heart
Verse II (Female Verse)
I know you said your sorry, I felt it in your voice
let this be the last time, you hurt me boy
I hope we can work it out, for better or worse
I believe in our vows, but that whiskeys a curse
Chorus
Lead
Bridge
(Female Line) I don’t want this to be the end but I’m so tired of hurting
(Male Line) and I don’t want to fill your heart anymore with 80 proof bourbon
Chorus
Tag (Male & Female)
I wanna hold you again in the dark, I wanna kiss your heart, I wanna kiss your heart
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Not big in to country but have enjoyed listening to your stuff. Very well put together. I am hoping to put my produced stuff out here in the next couple months. I’m gonna share your music with my acoustic partner. He is a big country fan and I think he’ll love it.
October 13, 2023
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I hope to hear some of your music and thanks for sharing my music. Keep on writing
October 14, 2023
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Howard Gripp
Not big in to country but have enjoyed listening to your stuff. Very well put together. I am hoping to put my produced stuff out here in the next couple months. I’m gonna share your music with my acoustic partner. He is a big country fan and I think he’ll love it.
October 13, 2023
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