I got this idea from one of my friends relationships. It seemed like one day they were fighting then the next day they were happy as can be. This happened all the time, they would break up and get back together and make up. I think some relationships are like that for some reason.
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Talkin’ Bout’ Us’
Verse I
I remember growing up in and out of love, those teenage years sure were tough
I remember breaking up, seemed like every day, cause foolish pride got in the way
I remember throwing down, don’t know why I cussed, he said, she said, stupid stuff
Pre-Chorus
It was love it was hate, push to shove, it was great, so let’s just cut to the chase
Chorus
I was Talkin’ bout’ us’ on those Friday nights, us in the neon lights, us doing shots at the bar
I was Talkin’ bout’ us’ on those Saturdays, us in my Chevrolet, us making love in my car
I was Talkin’ bout’ all the late nights, we stayed up and made up cause we took it just a little too far
I was Talkin’ bout’ us’
Verse II
Do you remember those nights, hanging out with friends, we were the ones fighting again
Do you remember that time, I caught you in a lie, I was drunk just being a guy
Pre-Chorus
It was love it was hate, push to shove, it was great, so let’s just cut to the chase
Chorus
I was Talkin’ bout’ us’ on those Friday nights, us in the neon lights, us doing shots at the bar
I was Talkin’ bout’ us’ on those Saturdays, us in my Chevrolet, us making love in my car
I was Talkin’ bout’ all the late nights, we stayed up and made up cause we took it just a little too far
Bridge
I was Talkin’ bout’ us’, I was talkin’ bout’ you and me
I was Talkin’ bout’ us’ I was talkin’ bout’ you and me
Chorus
I was Talkin’ bout’ us’ on those Friday nights, us in the neon lights, us doing shots at the bar
I was Talkin’ bout’ us’ on those Saturdays, us in my Chevrolet, us making love in my car
I was Talkin’ bout’ all the late nights, we stayed up and made up cause we took it just a little too far
I was Talkin’ bout’ all the weekends, we’d hang up and break up, now were bearing all the battle scars, I was talkin’ bout’ us
Oh, I was Talkin’ bout’ Us’
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VERY CREATIVE, PERFECT PACE VOCALLY. LOVE TO HEAR THIS ON THE RADIO. REALLY WELL WRITTEN AND PRODUCED
January 03, 2021
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Mark Barrett
VERY CREATIVE, PERFECT PACE VOCALLY. LOVE TO HEAR THIS ON THE RADIO. REALLY WELL WRITTEN AND PRODUCED
January 03, 2021
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