During a Bible study of Genesis, I was just thinking about how it must have been for Adam and Even, having known God at close range and a perfect relationship with each other, after the fall.
I would like to understand where this song, and others like it from my CD release "Unvarnished Truth" would fit. It is not quite gospel, not quite K-Love material. Otherwise, just whatever feedback you feel led to give.
Could sumit it to christian songwriting contest . I have had songs in second and third place.
October 03, 2023
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One word “Honesty”. The message of your song “Before the fall’ is honesty to the core. It almost made me cry listening to it. I’ve never heard anyone write about this story the way you did. Your concept is beautiful.
October 14, 2023
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Before the Fall
Evie, we don’t talk much and when we do, we fight
You pretend you’re sleeping when I reach for you at night
I’ve been thinking ‘bout our days in Paradise
When I was still the apple of your eye
We made love out in the open without guilt or pain
In the evenings we’d go walking in those years before the rain
Too innocent to know we had it all
When it was you and me and God before the fall
Now the kids all hate each other, I feel older every day.
Since we lost the garden, Eve, I’ve been afraid to pray
But I think about our days in Paradise
When we were still the apples of His eye
We lived our lives out in the open without fear or shame
In the evenings He’d walk with us in those years before the rain
We would always answer when He’d call
When it was you and me and God before the fall
Eve, is that a tear there on your face?
Oh, what, I’d give to take you back there to that kinder place.
When we lived life out in the open without fear or pain
In the evenings we’d go walking in those years before the rain
Too innocent to know we had it all
When it was you and me and God before the fall
Oh, just you and me and God before the fall.
Copyright, (c), 2012 Kelly Gazzaway
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Great love song about Adam and Eve and a current love. Your right it falls through the cracks . Release it on spodify play list . MAKE YOU TUBE VIDEO.
October 03, 2023
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Could sumit it to christian songwriting contest . I have had songs in second and third place.
October 03, 2023
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One word “Honesty”. The message of your song “Before the fall’ is honesty to the core. It almost made me cry listening to it. I’ve never heard anyone write about this story the way you did. Your concept is beautiful.
October 14, 2023
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David Pellegrini
Great love song about Adam and Eve and a current love. Your right it falls through the cracks . Release it on spodify play list . MAKE YOU TUBE VIDEO.
October 03, 2023
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