This is part of a project to write more congregational music that's fun and easy to sing. The gist of this one is this: the things God has done for me and the way He's treated me make me want to sing His praises. Halleluiah!
Singability, how hooky it is, basically any feedback is welcome. You won't hurt my feelings. 
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VERSE1
The shadow flees when the light invades it
And You've shined Your light on me
There’s only grace where my sin and shame lived
And now I’ve got a song to sing:
Halleluiah, halle-halleluiah
CHORUS
Halleluiah, You have set me free
From my fear and shame, no more chains on me
Halleluiah, You have made me whole
Healed my broken heart and my weary soul
Halle-halleluiah! Halle-halleluiah
VERSE2
Following you is the life I’m living
And I’ll live it to the full
This second chance that Your grace has given
Is such a miracle
Halleluiah, halle-halleluiah
CHORUS
BRIDGE
And my heart sings halle-halleluiah
And my soul cries halle-halleluiah
All that I am halle-halleluiah
Halle-halleluiah, halle-halleluiah
CHORUS
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Hey Adam! Seriously great song. Honest opinion based on first listen from someone who attends worship at a congregation that does not use instrumental music, the tempo is too fast for congregational singing. I love your voice, the melody, and guitar work. I hear this song being played on the radio, halle halleluiah is hooky/catchy, and the song makes me feel good. I would turn this up and make everyone be quiet in the car if this came on the radio.
April 17, 2023
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Rachel Cintula
Hey Adam! Seriously great song. Honest opinion based on first listen from someone who attends worship at a congregation that does not use instrumental music, the tempo is too fast for congregational singing. I love your voice, the melody, and guitar work. I hear this song being played on the radio, halle halleluiah is hooky/catchy, and the song makes me feel good. I would turn this up and make everyone be quiet in the car if this came on the radio.
April 17, 2023
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