This was a homework assignment from the Java songwriting group. I had to write a song that involved "a fireplace in winter". This is that song!
I didn't use a bridge in this one and am wondering if that matters.
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I climb the hill at Point Arthur Park
And look out at the city at night
There must be million people down there
Cause I see a million lights
Sometimes I wonder how it could be
That surrounded by so many souls
I still haven’t found somebody to love
One I can call my own
Oh my love I’m right here waiting
Waiting just for you
I promise all my love forever
If you’ll love me too
I try to imagine how good it will feel
To be lying within your arms
In front of fireplace on a cold winter night
Knowing I’m safe and warm
We’d watch as the flames do their fiery dance
While the snow falls gently outside
Neither of us alone anymore
Lost in a lovely surprise
Oh my love I’m right here waiting
Waiting just for you
I promise all my love forever
If you’ll love me too
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