Lyric sheet only. Still polishing it up. Looking for Melody writer. Country leaning outlaw country perhaps.
All constructive feedback welcome.
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V1)
I see the way you look at him when we walk into the room,
You think you have a shot with him, that's dangerous to assume.
I'm gonna give you a little warning, which is more than you deserve,
If you overstep your bounds with him, we'll be having more than words
Chorus)
I know my man's a looker
and looking is allowed
If you don't keep your hands to yourself
I'm about to draw a crowd
You don't stand a chance with him
any fool can see
He ain't passing up the good stuff
for watered down whiskey
V2)
You can keep your low cut tees and too short mini shirts
You're past your prime, you're half a dime, hearing that must hurt
I ain't trying to start a fight but hey if you're feeling frisky
Lets step outside and I'll throw back a little watered down whiskey
(Repeat Chorus)
Incase you still don't get it and I hope you hear this right,
You bring his drinks here at the bar
I'm the one he's home loving at night
(Repeat Chorus)
Only a fool would pass up the good stuff for watered down whiskey and sweetheart my man ain't no fool.
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