Very melancholy. The lyrics are super dark, but overall the feel of it is weirdly soothing. Definitely atmospheric. Great ambience.
January 14, 2014
Eric, glad you’re on Frettie. It’s nice to see and hear your other talent. I too would like to see “Maggie” posted on here.
January 16, 2014
Second song I’m hearing from you and I’m digging it! You’ve got your style and your vibe and it’s really working.
January 22, 2014
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I once ran away
a broken bloody bastard to his grave
And I was afraid
of a tolerance I just couldn't shake
And you saw me flee
and you watched, you watched me ruin everything
Didn't you?
You were in the ICU
My sister hoped that you make it through
But I wasn’t afraid
I guess I always knew you couldn’t stay.
And I saw you flee
And I watched, I watched you ruin everything.
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I like it and the guitar in the background. Good song Eric! You should share your song “Maggie” someday and get feedback on it.
January 13, 2014
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Very melancholy. The lyrics are super dark, but overall the feel of it is weirdly soothing. Definitely atmospheric. Great ambience.
January 14, 2014
1
Eric, glad you’re on Frettie. It’s nice to see and hear your other talent. I too would like to see “Maggie” posted on here.
January 16, 2014
1
Second song I’m hearing from you and I’m digging it! You’ve got your style and your vibe and it’s really working.
January 22, 2014
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Julie Field
I like it and the guitar in the background. Good song Eric! You should share your song “Maggie” someday and get feedback on it.
January 13, 2014