Paul,
This is one of my favorite songs by you. I’d have the beat drop just before you sing “Fall to Me” on the 1st Chorus. Also, consider adding an electric guitar single chord strum with a Chorus with large depth to support the piano and picking acoustic part. Increase the tempo if you do a full band version. Outro is awesome.
Thanks, Brent
June 11, 2021
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Fall To Me
© June 2, 2021...Paul deMarco, Bill O’Hanlon, Lucy LeBlanc
Fall To Me
Verse
Have we gone too high
Are you dizzy too?
Let’s enjoy the ride
Embrace the altitude
Pre:
Let my love
hush your heart
(Now)
Chorus
I know you're scared
It's a long way down
But I'll take care
I can steady the ground
So If you're gonna fall
Fall To Me
Verse
Hold out your arms
Lean back and let go
You won’t come to harm
I’ll keep you close
Pre:
Let my love
hush your heart
(oh)
Chorus
I know you're scared
It's a long way down
But I'll take care
I can steady the ground
So If you're gonna fall
Fall To Me
Bridge:
Ooh ooh ooh
Ooh ooh ooh
Chorus
I know you're scared
It's a long way down
But I'll take care
I can steady the ground
So If you're gonna fall
Fall To Me
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This is a beauty, melodically and lyrically. Love that piano patch. Singer is great, too.
June 10, 2021
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Paul,
This is one of my favorite songs by you. I’d have the beat drop just before you sing “Fall to Me” on the 1st Chorus. Also, consider adding an electric guitar single chord strum with a Chorus with large depth to support the piano and picking acoustic part. Increase the tempo if you do a full band version. Outro is awesome.
Thanks, Brent
June 11, 2021
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David Sanchez
This is a beauty, melodically and lyrically. Love that piano patch. Singer is great, too.
June 10, 2021
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