This is the Nashville modern country version of the previously posted song "Designs On You"
Any feedback welcome
Hi Paul
Your song had a good rhythm to it and you had a nice voice while singing it. As Kay said the intro and chorus doesn’t draw in the listener right away and that was kind of how I heard it too. Thanks for posting
December 07, 2019
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Designs on You
© Aug. 21/2019….Bill O’Hanlon, Paul DeMarco, Lucy LeBlanc
I see you every mornin’
You flash your usual smile
You know the latte I want before I utter a word
Damn, I’ve always loved your style
When you go to ring up my order
Your t-shirt falls just off your shoulder
‘n I see that tattoo
A different side of you
A broken heart with angel wings
Chorus:
You’ve got designs on you
I wanna see some more
I’ve got designs on you too
You’re making this broken heart soar
Who knew that love could start with a torn tattoo
Got designs on you
I wanna know that story
Who left that mark on you?
Tell me who broke your heart, how did you rise above it
How did you make it through?
There’s a mystery about you now
You’ve gotten underneath my skin somehow
Wanna learn everything
About those angel wings
And uncover who you really are
Chorus:
You’ve got designs on you
I wanna see some more
I’ve got designs on you too
You’re making this broken heart soar
Who knew that love could start with a torn tattoo
Got designs on you
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This is my favorite version from the first chorus through:) I like your modern country sound/music. The entro and first chorus doesn’t draw me in like the chorus, but once it gets to the chorus, I love it!
December 01, 2019
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Hi Paul
Your song had a good rhythm to it and you had a nice voice while singing it. As Kay said the intro and chorus doesn’t draw in the listener right away and that was kind of how I heard it too. Thanks for posting
December 07, 2019
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Kay Williams/Mott
This is my favorite version from the first chorus through:) I like your modern country sound/music. The entro and first chorus doesn’t draw me in like the chorus, but once it gets to the chorus, I love it!
December 01, 2019
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