This song was written with very spiritual intentions. It is a battle with self, that we are always searching for the "good' and that "good" is always waiting and ultimately finding.
I have always taken on music by myself with not much feedback. Would love and appreciate any that can help! Thanks!
Chris, your guitar playing is really nice. This is really nice. You have great energy in your music and your lyrics and stories are very detailed. Looking forward to hearing more for sure.
January 11, 2014
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Thanks for the feedback Dennis. Time is starting to offer creativity some more chances in my life right now, so I hope to get new stuff uploaded soon.
January 18, 2014
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V1
I wanna walk with you under the moon,
reflection shines upon your face,
And would you know the shine that glows,
comes from something I create . . .I created it.
V2
And as time goes by and you analyze,
I will always be with you,
And when your minds eye has to find it,
I hope that you can find me too . . .Find me.
Chorus
This is not the time or place to let your conscience fall,
You will not make it further acting like you know it all,
We all walk this life searching for something,
and oh I know it would not be just for nothing,
Theirs a place in your here for everyone, you know, you know,
V3
As you close your eyes and all inside,
builds and fills you up,
Remember that I am always by your side,
Don't forget I've come for you . . .I'm comin'.
Chorus2
Bridge
I couldn't take it, time wouldn't break it,
I'm gonna hold you with my, with my bare hands,
Loves gonna build it, and Im gonna lay the brick,
I'm gonna hold you with my bare hands,
You'll reach for it, I wouldn't shade it,
I'm gonna hold you with my bare hands,
I miss placed it, your gonna chase it,
I'm gonna hold you with my with my bare hands,
Chorus3
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I have always taken on music by myself with not much feedback. Would love and appreciate any that can help! Thanks!
January 09, 2014
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Chris, your guitar playing is really nice. This is really nice. You have great energy in your music and your lyrics and stories are very detailed. Looking forward to hearing more for sure.
January 11, 2014
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Thanks for the feedback Dennis. Time is starting to offer creativity some more chances in my life right now, so I hope to get new stuff uploaded soon.
January 18, 2014
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Christopher Woten
I have always taken on music by myself with not much feedback. Would love and appreciate any that can help! Thanks!
January 09, 2014
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