The grass ain't always greener
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Haha “a few years ago” is right! This is my most retro song I’ve ever written, channeling my 90’s self. I appreciate your kind words about the song- thanks so much!
April 20, 2021
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Someone’s Gonna Cry Themselves to Sleep
She’s been working double shifts at the convenience store
been standing on her feet ‘til she can’t stand no more
but the pay’s alright
and Lord knows she’s got no plans tonight
So she’s lookin’ through her fridge around at 1 am
and she finds the box of chocolates sent from him
about a month ago
wrapped up in a big pink bow
with a note to the sweetest girl he’s ever known
-but he won’t be coming home
Someone’s gonna cry themselves to sleep
drowning in a river wide and deep
morning won’t you come and rescue me
‘cause someone’s gonna cry themselves to sleep
She’s packed up all their memories out to the garage
can’t believe their life together was some mirage
the dreams that marriage brings
highchairs and old porch swings
Now another day to try and put her makeup on
but the radio keeps playing the same old songs
“love will find a way”
and there goes another day
Friday night her friends come by to paint the town
-but she’s nowhere to be found
Someone’s gonna cry themselves to sleep
drowning in a river wide and deep
morning won’t you come and rescue me
‘cause someone’s gonna cry themselves to sleep
There’s nothing greener in some other field
weep for all our memories never fulfilled
he will find- he’ll never know true love like mine
Half a year goes by as time keeps spinning ‘round
she gets home late from work and puts the groceries down
next to the telephone
sees the message light on
hears “it didn’t work out babe so I’m a comin’ back”
-but she’s too strong now for that
Someone’s gonna cry themselves to sleep
gonna regret what you did not keep
next time you better look before you leap
‘cause someone’s gonna cry themselves to sleep
yeah someone’s gonna cry themselves to sleep
© words and music by holden forrest 2021
holdenforrest@gmail.com ph. 714.904.1982
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Tight writing and production on this , could imagine Martina singing this a few years back.
April 20, 2021
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Haha “a few years ago” is right! This is my most retro song I’ve ever written, channeling my 90’s self. I appreciate your kind words about the song- thanks so much!
April 20, 2021
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Sean Murphy
Tight writing and production on this , could imagine Martina singing this a few years back.
April 20, 2021
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