A sincere love song for our great country. No political agenda, no threatening to kick ass, etc. Just snapshot images of our beautiful America...
Any and all comments or criticisms are most appreciated
Love it! Always good to write songs that bring people up!!!!
I could see this getting cut.
Right on!
May 08, 2021
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American Song
If I was to paint a picture of my country
I’d start with wheat fields far and wide
and in the background a thousand mountains
strong and proud and 5 miles high
and on the outsides, I’d paint the coastlines
bold and brave against the sea
and high above the bluest shades of heaven
that could ever be
This is the landscape of America
the richness of the earth and sky
blessed by God's pure guiding light
shining out to the world, when liberty is gone
always there to right a wrong
this is my American Song
If I was to write a book about my people
I’d start by what resides within
hunger for truth, justice, and compassion
for every race and shade of skin
the strength of will which never will surrender
no matter what the odds or price
from country town to city center
the chance to build a better life
This is the story of America
the power to the common man
divided we fall, united we stand among
our brothers and sisters at home
inviting all here to belong
this is my American Song
If I was to write a song about my country
with every note of melody
I’d wipe my eyes for all the sacrifice
so many have made to keep me free
then let refrains ring out from the freight trains,
coal mines, farms, and old steel yards
and feel the tempo build to a crescendo
of rocketships beyond the stars
This is the song of America
of ingenuity and pride
of confidence to sometimes stride alone
sometimes many miles from home
protecting the weak from the strong
helping those when hope is gone
this is my American Song
shining like the sun at dawn
singing our American Song
singing our American Song
© words and music by holden forrest 2020
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Holden, great job on this song, as the United States needs a song like this today on the radio. Most of the songs that are like this are slow and often loose the listener. Listeners often think it’s just another Red, White and Blue Song. Not this one, I love the Up Tempo melody and how it kept me engaged to the story and creativity in the lyrics . So Great Job
February 07, 2021
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Love it! Always good to write songs that bring people up!!!!
I could see this getting cut.
Right on!
May 08, 2021
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Roger Fournier
Holden, great job on this song, as the United States needs a song like this today on the radio. Most of the songs that are like this are slow and often loose the listener. Listeners often think it’s just another Red, White and Blue Song. Not this one, I love the Up Tempo melody and how it kept me engaged to the story and creativity in the lyrics . So Great Job
February 07, 2021
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