Another song written with Mr. Mike Parker and Dylan Singletary. Still leaning hard into the Josh Kerr kind of vibes.
The song is about making the perfect ending in your mind for the one that got away
Open to anything, but specifically, does every line point to the main heartbeat of the song? Do any of the lyrics get confusing or hard to follow
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Verse
Dreams came easy when we were twenty three
You had me believing, that we were meant to be
Then Cali called your name; I moved to Tennessee
That future we had planned is just a memory
Chorus
A memory that we could have made
A lifetime that we wouldn’t trade
And there's nothing I can do to shake it; can’t shake it
I can’t get you off my mind
I see you all the time
I’m stuck on rewind; makin’ up memories
V2
Dreams came easy, but now it's hard to sleep
It’s make believe when I see you here with me
You built yourself a future, I built my fantasy
It’s like you never left…(I’m) lost in that memory
Bridge
We made all those promises
But now all I have left is
the life we never got to live
We made all those promises
But now all I have left is
the life we never got to live
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Hello. I like your lyrics. Immediately, they get to the point; you can feel them- very relatable. Nice twist in the chorus- MAKIN’ UP memories. Yes.
Fox
February 01, 2021
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Fox Beyer
Hello. I like your lyrics. Immediately, they get to the point; you can feel them- very relatable. Nice twist in the chorus- MAKIN’ UP memories. Yes.
Fox
February 01, 2021
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