Co-wrote this one with my friend dylan, tryin to channel our best Josh Kerr vibes
I like the song but don't think it is quite there yet
1. Not sure if the song needs a bridge or not, not sure where we would go lyrically
2. Are the verses as strong as the chorus and if not how can we make them stronger
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Verse
Staring at these faded polaroids
Each one of themes could tell a different story
This one of us when we were seventeen
So long ago it feels like just a dream
Or this one when we drove out to the lake
Cand we got lost in my old chevrolet
Those blue lights nearly got my heart to stop
He told me watch my speed but let me off
Chorus
Do you remember back to that hotel room
I got in cali just so I could see you
All the memories you were takin with ya camera
Every picture brings me right back to
That warm summer breezes blowin right through your hair
And lookin back now it still doesn't seem real
The feeling I had when I let myself fall,
That memory aint faded at all
Verse
This of us we took down at the beach
You splashed the water up all over me
The way the moon light glistened on your face
It takes me back to that night in LA
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