An uptempo song about falling in love
I would love to hear any and all feedback. Thanks for the listen!
Thanks for listening Allan, and for the generous note. I hope all is well with you and yours.
January 18, 2021
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VERSE
It was just another takeout Tuesday night
I left work late, dog tired
I wanted to get home, kick back and have a beer
But as I’m sitting there in the drive-thru line
This purple chevy truck rear-ends mine
And there’s a brown-eyed knock-out shrug’n in my rearview
PRE CHORUS
Well, one thing lead to another
She bought me dinner and I got her number
CHORUS
Bam!
When love hits the fan
It wrecks all your plans
Spark’s are fly’n
It’s electrify’n
How she knocks you right on the floor
Your head is spin’n
You can’t stop grin’n
She’s the one you’ve been praying for
When love hits the fan
Bam!
VERSE
About a hundred texts later and less than a week
We’re out at a bar and on our second drink
She’s more stun’n than I thought before
Then she says, “It’s time for Karaoke.”
So I’m thinking, “Girl, you don’t know me!”
But I say, “Well, what are we waiting for?”
PRE CHORUS
Then she laughs, “Boy, I gotcha!”
And I say, “From the second I saw you.”
BRIDGE
Like a lightening bolt from a clear blue sky
It’s crazy fate when two hearts collide
OUTRO
Spark’s are fly’n
It’s electrify’n
How she knocks you right on the floor
Your head is spin’n
You can’t stop grin’n
She’s the one you’ve been praying for
When love hits the fan
Bam!
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Hi Valentine, Been awhile but worth the wait. Great song. Really enjoyed it. Much success with this one. Stay well.
January 16, 2021
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Thanks for listening Allan, and for the generous note. I hope all is well with you and yours.
January 18, 2021
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Allan Rosensweig
Hi Valentine, Been awhile but worth the wait. Great song. Really enjoyed it. Much success with this one. Stay well.
January 16, 2021
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