I wrote this during the quarantine because everything was so depressing and I needed something fun and happy!
I would love any kind of feedback. Thank you in advance!
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Nice idea/title take on a great familiar feeling that never gets old—- makes me H.A. double P. Why indeed!
August 03, 2020
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Thank a lot Jackson for taking the time to listen and to post such a nice comment. I really appreciate it!
August 03, 2020
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Thank you for your generous comment Allan. That was very kind of you to say. I got my fingers crossed!
August 07, 2020
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I hope you don’t mind asking who did the demo? Is that Adam C. singing?
August 14, 2020
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Hi Allan,
No problem.
Yes, it is Adam Cunningham. I can only wish it was me!!!
August 15, 2020
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Love this! Made me happy and got my head bopping right out of the gate. Exactly what you want out of a fun song.
Great job.
August 20, 2020
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Hi Chris,
Thanks a lot for that really kind note. I really appreciate it!
August 20, 2020
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VERSE 1
You’re the right in my Now
The high in my five
The all in my good on a Friday night ride
The real in my big
The big in my smile
The hot in my damn when I look in your eyes
PRE CHORUS
Just you and me and our chemistry, girl
Like the birds and the bees
Sit’n up in that tree, girl
K I S S I N G’n
Be’n as we’re right where we’re meant to be
CHORUS
You’re my H. A. double P. why
You’re my H. A. double P. why
You’re my H. A. double P. why
I feel so good
VERSE 2
You’re the hands on my roof
The Drake on my mix
The squeeze on my leg when the night starts to kick
The laughs on my porch
The dance on my lawn
The tug on my shirt when they’re playing our song
PRE CHORUS
Just you and me and our chemistry, girl
Like the birds and the bees
Sit’n up in that tree, girl
K I S S I N G’n
Be’n as we’re right where we’re meant to be
CHORUS
You’re my H. A. double P. why
You’re my H. A. double P. why
You’re my H. A. double P. why
I feel so good
BRIDGE
Cuz we got good time go signs, baby
Lots a cloud nine sunshine, bright crazy
We got the sublime streamlined
And all our stars in a line
CHORUS
You’re my H. A. double P. why
You’re my H. A. double P. why
You’re my H. A. double P. why
I feel so good
You’re my H. A. double P. why
You’re my H. A. double P. why
You’re my H. A. double P. why
I feel so good
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First of all, love the title! This is a song that a variety of people could sign and make their own. Blake, Billy Currington, Lee Brice, just to name a few.
July 31, 2020
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Nice idea/title take on a great familiar feeling that never gets old—- makes me H.A. double P. Why indeed!
August 03, 2020
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Thank a lot Jackson for taking the time to listen and to post such a nice comment. I really appreciate it!
August 03, 2020
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Thank you for your generous comment Allan. That was very kind of you to say. I got my fingers crossed!
August 07, 2020
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I hope you don’t mind asking who did the demo? Is that Adam C. singing?
August 14, 2020
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Hi Allan,
No problem.
Yes, it is Adam Cunningham. I can only wish it was me!!!
August 15, 2020
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Love this! Made me happy and got my head bopping right out of the gate. Exactly what you want out of a fun song.
Great job.
August 20, 2020
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Hi Chris,
Thanks a lot for that really kind note. I really appreciate it!
August 20, 2020
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First of all, love the title! This is a song that a variety of people could sign and make their own. Blake, Billy Currington, Lee Brice, just to name a few.
July 31, 2020
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