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Snapshots of a friend's professional travels
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Thanks Allan. Yes, I agree I could have beefed up the chorus lyrically. -Fox
December 18, 2020
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Got grease
on hinges
been home
to one night binges
Guiness,
an IPA
COME IN
and stay
Michelob
and Amber Bach
got Poison
wanna rock?
These dives
Fry fish here
free of change
seat yourself
small groups or large
Midnight Rodeo
to Sky Bar
In them
Not to far
from home
Michelob
and Amber Bach
Poison
wanna rock?
These dives
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Really liked the overall groove, melody and lyrics. Seems like the chorus was a little sparse, but that’s just a personal opinion. Great job.
December 17, 2020
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Thanks Allan. Yes, I agree I could have beefed up the chorus lyrically. -Fox
December 18, 2020
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Allan Rosensweig
Really liked the overall groove, melody and lyrics. Seems like the chorus was a little sparse, but that’s just a personal opinion. Great job.
December 17, 2020
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