It happens when you least expect it....A title written from "Song Title Challenge" on the C.L.I.M.B. podcast with Johnny Dwinell and Brent Baxter.
(Pearl Snap Studios demo)
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Your dirty shower towel on the bathroom floor
Your set of room keys swingin' in the front door
Cleanin’ up your tracks makes me shake my head
Thanks for lettin' your sister walk into this mess
I’ve taken all I can
And now you've crossed a line
Saw her at the sink
Now she's all mine
No more tv meals
On your cracked dinner plates
I’m movin’ out
Thank God for roommates
You always seem to leave with the TV on
I can still hear you snoring all damn night long
And I’m so damn glad I put up with your junk
Cause you brought her in and now we’re in love
I’ve taken all I can
And now you've crossed a line
Saw her at the sink
Now she's all mine
No more tv meals
On your cracked dinner plates
I’m movin’ out
Thank God for roommates
Cause I took a knee
And she said yes
So
Sorry I can’t help with your broken dishwasher
Cause I’m in love with your parent's daughter
We bought an old house in a complex downtown
I’m about to crack a beer and write my vows
I’ve taken all I can
And now you've crossed a line
Saw her at the sinkNow she's all mine
No more tv meals
On your cracked dinner plates
I’m movin’ out
Thank God for roommates
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