Jeff,
I like the tune. Clever lyrics. The vocal effect that you use might work well to start off with, but maybe it could move into a “normal” sound after the first verse. Then move it back into the effect. Its a cool sound, but it might be more dramatic to use it intermittently. Enjoyed it though, Thanks for sharing it.
Greg
January 23, 2014
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Jeff,
I like the tune. Clever lyrics. The vocal effect that you use might work well to start off with, but maybe it could move into a “normal” sound after the first verse. Then move it back into the effect. Its a cool sound, but it might be more dramatic to use it intermittently. Enjoyed it though, Thanks for sharing it.
Greg
January 23, 2014
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Dennis Field
Clever. What a visual I get from such a simple lyric.
December 05, 2013
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