This is a song about struggling with lack of drive or passion and just needing something good to happen.
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I've got a heart
It beats like a curse
But at least there's some sort of movement in me
To make me feel alive
I've got a world
It runs me down
But you know I ain't giving it up
It's some kind of life
Don't count me out just yet
I've still got something to show
Emptiness waiting to fill up
With something I know
It's your love, it's your love
It's your love, it's your love
I've got a head
It pounds like a drum
Kicking and screaming from behind my eyes
Just trying to get out
I've got a car
If it don't break down
The wheels spin like the sun and the moon
Just circling my doubt
Don't count me out just yet
I've still got something to show
Emptiness waiting to fill up
With something I know
It's your love, it's your love
It's your love, it's your love
Don't you think I have done wrong?
Don't you know I have done right
Should I give up and go home?
Without you, I just might
Don't count me out just yet
I've still got something to show
Emptiness waiting to fill up
With something I know
It's your love, it's your love
It's your love, it's your love
Don't count me out just yet
I've still got something to show
Emptiness waiting to fill up
With something I know
It's your love, it's your love
It's your love, it's your love
Don't count me out just yet
I've still got something to show
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