Come on home by Paul deMarco, Kellie L Niederhelman and Rita Weyls
First friend, you were just two doors down
We ran together till you left town
Young and restless fighting battles on your own
...you’ve been gone too long
... Your little sins have no definition
... That’s why they’re so easily forgiven
... Don’t you drown in deep regrets
Cos sometimes life just makes no sense
Ch.
You’re slightly beat, but you’re not broken
Wandered along this road alone
Your spirit tired but heart still open so
Come on home... come on home
V
The tears they dry but the words still burn
There is no shame when the pain returns
Cos Its ok if you’re not ok
The way i feel... will never change
Ch
B
You have your demons, just like everyone else
Right now Its time to learn to love yourself
Chorus
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hey Paul,,you got a great vocal..pia/vocal really shows it off, personally I think it could use a little more production I can hear some great string lines to really move the song along. Also, have you ever thought about doing some remote vocal, like Matt Dame does? I might have a song or two that would be great with your voice, let me know what you think.
May 15, 2020
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wayne schiferl
hey Paul,,you got a great vocal..pia/vocal really shows it off, personally I think it could use a little more production I can hear some great string lines to really move the song along. Also, have you ever thought about doing some remote vocal, like Matt Dame does? I might have a song or two that would be great with your voice, let me know what you think.
May 15, 2020
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