I think everyone has those days when they don't feel like they measure up. This song is how I felt during one of my funks. As usual, the production quality isn't great given I do it in my own house with novice equipment!
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Verse 1:
Another reason, another fail
Another round of chasing my tail
The feelings inside often won't let me go
They tell me heartache, I don't wanna know
Maybe now it's time to head home
Pre-chorus:
But how do I keep on running, if I'm always down?
How do I keep on holding on, when I scream no one hears a sound
Chorus:
Will somebody, find me, and take me home where I belong
I cannot stand to be this alone
Will somebody, rescue me, there's only so much I can take
My battered heart needs a break
Somebody, somebody
Verse 2:
Another bad day, another hurt
Another bridge that feels burnt
Trying to sweep up what feels broken
Trying to let go but not stop hoping
Trying to find the best of what's left of me
Pre-chorus
Chorus (2x)
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You have a very pleasant vocal quality in your voice and the production doesn’t really matter to a great producer
March 30, 2020
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Joseph Guerra
You have a very pleasant vocal quality in your voice and the production doesn’t really matter to a great producer
March 30, 2020
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