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A song about finding out some if things you were taught when you were young weren't true...
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I really like this song, Paul. Nice job! Your vocal sounds really good on this. Really good vocal track. Anybody ever mention that your voice and singing style kind of sounds a little like Jon Bon Jovi? 
I enjoyed listening to this! The mixes for your last couple of demos on here have really, really sounded great. Whatever you’re doing, keep on doing it!
March 10, 2020
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Burn it Down
By Teddy Parker & Paul deMarco ©2020
This old house... needs burning down
If these old walls... could hear me now
My old ways... have cause some pain
If you listen real close... You can see it on my face
And all of the promises couldn’t save me
From all the rights and wrongs that they gave me
So I'll burn it down, I'll burn it down
I've seen the lies... I've seen the truths
They can look just the same when they’re right in front of you
I've seen the light... I've seen the dark
I've seen what they can do... to a young mans heart
And all of the promises couldn’t save me
From all the rights and wrongs that they gave me
So I'll burn it down, I'll burn it down
Break
I’ve seen the rise... I’ve seen the fall
Ive seen a man double down... But then I saw him lose it all
So I'll burn it down, I'll burn it down
I'll burn it down, I'll burn it down
I'll burn it down, I'll burn it down
I'll burn it down, I'll bu-rn it down
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Hey Paul, cool track. I get the raspy vibe in it and it was good to listen along - but once you came to the bridge(?) with your “doodidoo, doodidooo oou” (pardon me if i butchered the lyrics) to me that was my favorite part of the song. Hits you real hard with a good use of harmonies. Thanks for sharing.
March 08, 2020
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I really like this song, Paul. Nice job! Your vocal sounds really good on this. Really good vocal track. Anybody ever mention that your voice and singing style kind of sounds a little like Jon Bon Jovi? I enjoyed listening to this! The mixes for your last couple of demos on here have really, really sounded great. Whatever you’re doing, keep on doing it!
March 10, 2020
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Hey Paul, cool track. I get the raspy vibe in it and it was good to listen along - but once you came to the bridge(?) with your “doodidoo, doodidooo oou” (pardon me if i butchered the lyrics) to me that was my favorite part of the song. Hits you real hard with a good use of harmonies. Thanks for sharing.
March 08, 2020
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