I have since changed this song a bit. I slowed it down and changed the last verse to make it stronger. You can find the change in the written lyrics. I haven't re-recorded it yet so the changes are not on this.
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I been trying hard to reach you
but I don't know who you are
I'd go anywhere to meet you
to the bottom of my heart
To find a true believer who will not let you down
someone who wouldn't leave you for any other game in town;
waiting for your love
you must be out there hiding
think I can feel you in the dark
you been out there crying
cause someone broke your heart
in a world of lonely people
we depend on hope and trust
you better never quit believing
no matter what the cost
waiting for your love
you must be out there hiding
trying to get home
you been out there trying
to make it on your own
just step into the sunshine
and lay it on the line
why gamble with a heart break
when the love you have is mine
waiting for your love
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