I wrote this song to be silly and fun, something people can dance around to and tap their feet, clap their hands, etc. I guess it's a kid's Christian song but fun for adults too, hopefully. I am just learning Band in a Box. This is my third background track; as in only three songs in total completed so far. I will add the lyrics and upload the next version when it's done. I need an inexpensive but good USB mic. If anyone knows the name of a good one that's cheap, please let me know. Thanks.
Feedback would be appreciated. However, I may not have the skills to implement your suggestions....
It’s 2007 BIAB so it’s old. I’m going to upgrade to the newest one. Not sure what DAW is though. Thanks for you comments. I just ordered a better mic. I won’t redo the vocals until I receive it and set it up.
July 21, 2019
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Heaven Is Our Destination
(We've got the love of Jesus
We've got the peace of Jesus
We've got the joy of Jesus) Repeat
(Church ladies) We are saved! We are blessed! Jesus is the very best!
Left. Right. Left. Right.
Chorus
Heaven is our destination. We are the army of God.
We are the children of His nation. We are the family of God.
(We've got the power of Jesus
We've got the mind of Jesus
We've got the heart of Jesus) Repeat
(NY Gangster accent) Jesus is our superman. If He can't help you, no one can! Left. Right. Left. Right.
Chorus
You're a sinner. You're not worthy. Jesus can save your soul.
Let Him forgive you. Make Him your Master. Then heaven can be yours!
(We have the hands of Jesus
We have the help of Jesus
We have the hope of Jesus) Repeat
(Southern accent) We feel sorry for you. Ya ain't got Christ, we've sorry for you! Left. Right. Left. Right.
Chorus
We feel sorry for you. You ain't got Christ, we've sorry for you!
Jesus is our superman! If He can't help you, no one can!
We are saved! We are blessed! Jesus is the very best!
Left. Right. Left. Right. Left. Right. Left. Right.
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Interesting music I use Bnb sometimes haven’t used it in awhile it’s the 2017 version not sure which one you are using they have integrated it into the Daw now
Lyrics look good would like to hear the final
July 17, 2019
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It’s 2007 BIAB so it’s old. I’m going to upgrade to the newest one. Not sure what DAW is though. Thanks for you comments. I just ordered a better mic. I won’t redo the vocals until I receive it and set it up.
July 21, 2019
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Corey Bourque
Interesting music I use Bnb sometimes haven’t used it in awhile it’s the 2017 version not sure which one you are using they have integrated it into the Daw now
Lyrics look good would like to hear the final
July 17, 2019
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