Just remembering Janis Joplin - I tried to write something similar to her style.
No female available in the studio so the song was demoed by an available male singer.
Would appreciate feedback, suggestions, contacts of all kinds.
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Well I just keep fallin' to pieces;
My heart’s like a heavy load.
Old memories just pass me by –
And there’s nothing left to hold.
But if some day you think you see a lonely girl -
In the shadows of your mind,
You know it just might be that sad and lonely girl -
The one you left behind…
In the shadows of your mind.
When I’m near you in my dreams -
It’s like a light turns on.
But in the morning it’s so dark -
Now that you have gone.
But if some day you think you see a lonely girl -
In the canyons of your mind,
You know it just might be that sad and lonely girl -
The one you left behind…
In the canyons of your mind.
Yes, I just keep falling to pieces -
Thinking of what went wrong.
Dreaming of you the whole night long -
I just keep hangin’ on…
But if sometimes you think you hear a hurtin’ voice -
That keeps echoing in your mind,
You know it just might be the sad and hurting voice
Of the girl you left behind -
That keeps echoing in your mind.
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