Romantic song with a story behind it demoed by a studio vocalist
Would appreciate feedback, suggestions, contacts of all kinds
Thank you sincerely, Corey. I intended this song for a lady singer. It might be a little long - I’m just hoping the “story” and the music will keep it from being boring!! We’ll see.
July 12, 2019
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Looking back across the years, had some joy, I cried some tears;
And like a blessing from above I recall our tender love.
Now times are hard, good times are few;
Sometimes can't help feelin' blue.
When I don't know what to do - I remember loving you.
Chorus
Yes, Baby, Baby, I remember loving you -
A living fantasy, a rhapsody,
A perfect world for two - when I remember loving you.
Verse
Winters turn to Springtimes, Summers turn to Fall,
Can't forget the splendor and the glory of it all.
Chorus
Yes, Baby, Baby, I remember loving you -
A living fantasy, a rhapsody,
A perfect world for two - when I remember loving you.
Verse
In the cold and lonely night, no one's there to hold on tight;
Just a dream that we once knew, when our love was young and true.
Life goes on, yes, this I know but like a movin' picture show;
I relive the story of - and the glory of our love.
Chorus
Yes, Baby, Baby, I remember loving you -
A living fantasy, a reverie,
A perfect world for two - when I remember loving you.
Bridge
Sorrows there are many - pain there's plenty of;
Yet there's nothing that uplifts me like the story (glory) of our love…
Chorus
Yes, Baby, Baby, I remember loving you -
A living fantasy, a rhapsody,
A perfect world for two - when I remember loving you...
Yes… I remember loving you.
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i like the feel of it not made for today’s music for sure but i don’t think you were aiming for that.[Rat Pack Song] the length was a little long maybe could cut it down a bit i like how you rhymed the 2nd line of the chorus your 2nd verse is actually a bridge or sounds like it
one suggestion trim the drums down a little. But who am i to give advise im still trying to learn myself
July 12, 2019
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Thank you sincerely, Corey. I intended this song for a lady singer. It might be a little long - I’m just hoping the “story” and the music will keep it from being boring!! We’ll see.
July 12, 2019
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Corey Bourque
i like the feel of it not made for today’s music for sure but i don’t think you were aiming for that.[Rat Pack Song] the length was a little long maybe could cut it down a bit i like how you rhymed the 2nd line of the chorus your 2nd verse is actually a bridge or sounds like it
one suggestion trim the drums down a little. But who am i to give advise im still trying to learn myself
July 12, 2019
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