woke up with this title in my head and it was like I had to write it. The title is unique, if not the idea and I decided to put it to a sort r&b/ reggae feel, with the help of the world's oldest drum machine!
General comments as usual.
Thanks Frank. Originally the near rhyme didn’t concern me but I am working on this and should have a slightly different wording soon.
Rk
May 01, 2019
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Hi Richard I like this song a lot!. It’s very different and I can hear it 2 ways, in a true Caribbean style or maybe even sung by a Southern Gospel quartet. Of course for each respective style the rhythms would need to be different but the top-line is there, very memorable!. I’d look to collaborate with an artist or writer in those respective genres to make sure you have the correct elements for each. Best of luck with it!
May 24, 2019
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Thanks for your comments. I have since tweaked this a little, and am trying to find a suitable placement.
May 24, 2019
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I really enjoyed this one, Richard. Nice message in your song. Thanks for sharing.
September 20, 2019
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WORLDWIDE NOEL
Two thousand years ago Jesus was born
In a manger he lay his head on a cold winter’s morn
He came to calm stormy waters and lift up our faith
Let every single soul on earth glorify His name
So ring out that Christmas joy Ring out those bells
Join in and celebrate A WORLDWIDE NOEL
From the plains of Manitoba to the seashores of France
Around the globe, let’s all proclaim the coming of the Lamb
Raise our voices, dance the dance, we cheerfully sing
East and West, North and South, give praise to the King
CH
From the Colorado mountains way down to Brazil
Everybody shout the Good News, God’s prophecy fulfilled
From Mexico to Switzerland, decorate the tree
But don’t forget the miracle who came to set us free
CH
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Hi Richard, your song is cheerful and catchy! I like the message, it’s not only that Jesus was born, but also brings together people all over the world and stands for love and peace.
I wonder if you could fix your rhyme scheme in line 3+4.
April 29, 2019
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Thanks Frank. Originally the near rhyme didn’t concern me but I am working on this and should have a slightly different wording soon.
Rk
May 01, 2019
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Hi Richard I like this song a lot!. It’s very different and I can hear it 2 ways, in a true Caribbean style or maybe even sung by a Southern Gospel quartet. Of course for each respective style the rhythms would need to be different but the top-line is there, very memorable!. I’d look to collaborate with an artist or writer in those respective genres to make sure you have the correct elements for each. Best of luck with it!
May 24, 2019
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Thanks for your comments. I have since tweaked this a little, and am trying to find a suitable placement.
May 24, 2019
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I really enjoyed this one, Richard. Nice message in your song. Thanks for sharing.
September 20, 2019
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Frank Renfordt
Hi Richard, your song is cheerful and catchy! I like the message, it’s not only that Jesus was born, but also brings together people all over the world and stands for love and peace.
I wonder if you could fix your rhyme scheme in line 3+4.
April 29, 2019
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