Sometime change is tough and happens right under our nose
Anthony, very nice—you do a nice job of fitting admirably into that age old “troubadour” tradition—and I think you do a VERY nice job (on the guitar) of accompanying yourself—nice sensitivity instrumentally (always a mark of musical maturity and skill).
I have listened to a number of your songs, and I almost never have corrections or suggestions to add—I think you’re basically the epitome of a first-rate “coffeehouse musician” (and I mean that in the BEST way)!!!
Once again, a really first-rate job!!!
November 01, 2018
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P.S. I think you’re also a first-rate songwriter (I noticed I didn’t state that in my above feedback, so please forgive the temporary oversight)!
November 01, 2018
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There's a little less hair on the top of my head
And a little more stuck to the sink
My memory is fading, eyesight is failing
Making it easy to see
That I'm more like, Im more like the man I thought I'd never be
My temper is quicker, waistline is thicker
And I'm finding it hard to believe
I buy shoes made for comfort cause when both of your feet hurt
You choose orthopedic relief
Yes Im more like, I’m more like the man I thought I'd never be
Im in more of a hurry and sometimes I worry
When life isn’t just as it seems
But sometime ago there was a fork in the road
And a change to the way that I think
I’m still scared of the silence, but when it gets quiet
I stay when I’d much rather leave
And I am more sentimental and tear upr a little
When my wife and I both can agree
That I’m more like, I’m more like the man I thought I'd never be
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Anthony,
Man can I relate to this one…
You have the rare ability to keep me on the edge of my seat and waiting for your next line, which never disappoints. Bravo, sir!
September 28, 2018
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Anthony, very nice—you do a nice job of fitting admirably into that age old “troubadour” tradition—and I think you do a VERY nice job (on the guitar) of accompanying yourself—nice sensitivity instrumentally (always a mark of musical maturity and skill).
I have listened to a number of your songs, and I almost never have corrections or suggestions to add—I think you’re basically the epitome of a first-rate “coffeehouse musician” (and I mean that in the BEST way)!!!
Once again, a really first-rate job!!!
November 01, 2018
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P.S. I think you’re also a first-rate songwriter (I noticed I didn’t state that in my above feedback, so please forgive the temporary oversight)!
November 01, 2018
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Guy Michael
Anthony,
Man can I relate to this one…
You have the rare ability to keep me on the edge of my seat and waiting for your next line, which never disappoints. Bravo, sir!
September 28, 2018
No members have liked this comment.