The song is about not waiting to goo after one's dreams. Positive message. Possible placement is TV/Film?
All constructive feedback is welcomed!
Hi Carol - Someday isn’t one - that’s a great hook! Cool idea, I really like it. Overall the lyrics look to me a bit too much like a sermon and the melody does not always support a positive message. I have the feeling you could make more of this really good idea, if you use more images instead of statements. Sorry, my comments are sometimes very direct, this is probably typically German. This is not a bad song, I just want to show where I see some potential for improvements. Hope you don’t mind. Keep on - Frank
July 12, 2018
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Thanks for the feedback, Frank. We have been getting consistent feedback from pros that this is more suited for TV/Film, synch placement. To make it in the country market, yes you are right it would need concrete images. But for now we are going the Placement route.
July 14, 2018
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Wow, very clever hook lyrics! “Seven Days….and someday isn’t one.” I love it! Great vocals and production! I love the melody of the chorus too.
July 24, 2018
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Thanks, Reid!! Hoping the ‘powers that be’ feel the same way about it.
July 25, 2018
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Some people are always wishin’, for luck to come their way
Always thinkin’, yeah that, things are gonna change
They scheme of, different ways to chase
After dreams that,’ll come another day
{Chorus}
THERE ARE SEVEN DAYS IN A WEEK AND SOMEDAY ISN’T ONE
I’M NOT GONNA WAIT TO GET WHAT I WANT
IF I FALL FACE FIRST, IN THE DIRT, I’LL GET BACK UP AND FIGHT
I’VE GOT MYSELF TO ANSWER TO IN THIS LIFE
AIN’T GONNA WASTE AWAY MY TIME—TIL MY TIME HERE’S DONE
THERE’S ONLY SEVEN DAYS IN A WEEK — SOMEDAY ISN’T ONE
SOMEDAY ISN’T ONE
What counts is the journey on this rocky road
I don’t need a, map to, see where it goes
Yeah I’ll never know what the future holds
Unless I start right now an’ let it unfold
(Repeat Chorus}
Bridge
Yesterday is in the past, tomorrow isn’t given
Although it goes by way too fast, today is meant for livin’
{Repeat Chorus}
NO, SOMEDAY ISN’T ONE
Richie Waterman/Carol Katterjohn
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Hi Carol - Someday isn’t one - that’s a great hook! Cool idea, I really like it. Overall the lyrics look to me a bit too much like a sermon and the melody does not always support a positive message. I have the feeling you could make more of this really good idea, if you use more images instead of statements. Sorry, my comments are sometimes very direct, this is probably typically German. This is not a bad song, I just want to show where I see some potential for improvements. Hope you don’t mind. Keep on - Frank
July 12, 2018
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Thanks for the feedback, Frank. We have been getting consistent feedback from pros that this is more suited for TV/Film, synch placement. To make it in the country market, yes you are right it would need concrete images. But for now we are going the Placement route.
July 14, 2018
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Wow, very clever hook lyrics! “Seven Days….and someday isn’t one.” I love it! Great vocals and production! I love the melody of the chorus too.
July 24, 2018
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Thanks, Reid!! Hoping the ‘powers that be’ feel the same way about it.
July 25, 2018
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Chad Sellers
I like the vibe and the hook works well for me. Nice work!
July 12, 2018
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