Just a rough work tape.
Tell me what you think, any advice is welcome 
Love the idea and melody. Look forward to hearing the finished product!
April 25, 2018
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Verse 1
Have you ever wondered why we didn't work?
When I saw you with her it hit me like a rock
It felt like a lightning striking hard to my chest so I almost
fainted to death
Chorus
Maybe she is just the way
to escape from me
and feelings you may have
Maybe you are only
playing a part in drama
where you can't get hurt
In drama where you can't get hurt
Verse 2
That's the reason why I gave up so easy
You caused me pain more than anyone
else ever had
So I left you behind
but those remains of the feelings
still keeps reminding me
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Love the idea and melody. Look forward to hearing the finished product!
April 25, 2018
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Ani Bergman
It is beautiful! Nice work
April 22, 2018