VERSE 1
It ain’t easy, you made me like this
When I was trying to love you,
You lived in your own world looking for the reasons to hate me
Or make me the way you wanted
CHORUS
So don’t blame me if I need this
Fresh start somewhere else
Where I can’t remember
How you killed something inside of me
But you shouldn’t forget
You made me like this
VERSE 2
Years have passed, and I still remember
Every word, how you treated me like I was nothing
I can still feel that despising look all over me
BRIDGE
Still I can’t trust no one
’Cause you took my faith
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Hi Noora
Liked the intro on this but for a listener it was really hard to understand the words coming out as they all seemed to just be continuous. The storyline is there but could possibly use some revamping to make it easier for a listener to follow along. Keep on writing and thanks for posting.
December 07, 2019
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Mike McCorison
Hi Noora
Liked the intro on this but for a listener it was really hard to understand the words coming out as they all seemed to just be continuous. The storyline is there but could possibly use some revamping to make it easier for a listener to follow along. Keep on writing and thanks for posting.
December 07, 2019
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