Lyrics and Melody by: Haydee Ahrens
About finally finding someone who really loves you but doubting your worthiness based on experiences from the past i.e. bad choices and severe mistreatment from people in previous relationships, etc. You will see how it ends. 
I would like to know if it kept your interest. Did the song adequately convey reluctance but also the prevailing hope?
Thank you so much Ani Bergman. At the end I imagine more runs in the vocals, but I decided to keep this more simple so that the singer/co-writer can add their flair to it.
May 07, 2018
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Wow, I love this song Haydee! It definitely held my interest, and I think your message of reluctance, but prevailing hope is clear.
What totally blew me away was your melody, vocals, and BGV’s, and how perfect they were for your song!
Awesome work, and if Elise P. is a possible regular co-writer with you, it will be a very powerful combination!
August 30, 2018
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I am a huge fan of harmonies, so I love it - so many years in choir ha ha. Nice writing Haydee!! Great song.
December 12, 2018
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A Taste
I told you about my many foolish mistakes,
You didn’t shame me once when I said…
I wasted time and love and bled
For those who don’t care if I’m dead.
And starting with you I won’t waste another day!
Chorus
A taste,
Ascending
O, my heart
It soars!
This love unending
O, I want it more.
I really do!
You helped me to see
past the pain I knew.
This bliss and peace,
I know that it is true.
I really do!
I love you.
Been thinkin’
Of you boy.
I love you
Been thinkin’
Of you boy.
Let you know
That you should walk away,
Gripped by love
But pointed at the door…
You helped me believe
I’m worth more
Than all mistakes
From long before.
And starting with you
I won’t waste another day…
A taste,
Ascending
O, my heart
It soars!
This love unending
O, I want it more.
I really do!
You helped me to see
past the pain I knew.
This bliss and peace,
I know that it is true.
I really do!
I love you.
Been thinkin’
Of you boy.
I really love you!
I love you
Been thinkin’
Of you boy.
Ooooooo...
Hey, Hey!!!
I really love you!!!
Ooooooo…
Hey, hey!!!
I really love you!!!
Ooooooo…
Hey, hey!!!
I really love you!!!
Oooooo…
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It did keep my interest. I liked that there wasn’t instruments. I didn’t really get any reluctance about loving the boy. But I did hear the hope.
April 22, 2018
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Thank you so much Ani Bergman. At the end I imagine more runs in the vocals, but I decided to keep this more simple so that the singer/co-writer can add their flair to it.
May 07, 2018
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Wow, I love this song Haydee! It definitely held my interest, and I think your message of reluctance, but prevailing hope is clear.
What totally blew me away was your melody, vocals, and BGV’s, and how perfect they were for your song!
Awesome work, and if Elise P. is a possible regular co-writer with you, it will be a very powerful combination!
August 30, 2018
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I am a huge fan of harmonies, so I love it - so many years in choir ha ha. Nice writing Haydee!! Great song.
December 12, 2018
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Ani Bergman
It did keep my interest. I liked that there wasn’t instruments. I didn’t really get any reluctance about loving the boy. But I did hear the hope.
April 22, 2018