The second song from the musical following `Hey little Girlie` and is a teenage Holly dedicating this song to her father.
HI Frank, thank you for your feedback. I will think about what you said about adding a climax in the upper register for the vocalist.
Many thanks, Barry
April 01, 2018
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Hi Barry, I’m not an expert for musicals, but this one sounds nice and well composed for me! However I was somehow expecting a climax where she goes into the upper register with her voice but that never happened. Maybe you can think about that. Good luck!
April 01, 2018
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HI Frank, thank you for your feedback. I will think about what you said about adding a climax in the upper register for the vocalist.
Many thanks, Barry
April 01, 2018
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Frank Renfordt
Hi Barry, I’m not an expert for musicals, but this one sounds nice and well composed for me! However I was somehow expecting a climax where she goes into the upper register with her voice but that never happened. Maybe you can think about that. Good luck!
April 01, 2018
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