How God's love keeps searching for us
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That is beautiful. My family is atheist and hipocrites are part of the reason. However, I like that idea of precious gold. I will definitely play around with it. Thank you.
January 23, 2018
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Once Saw Christ in a light of love
Something has changed, no longer once was
Did hipocrites and judgement turn your heart
Did you not know God or his love from the start
One lost coin, still searching. How his love is reaching.
Christ is still good, although followers may not
His love can be inside of your heart
Connecting with his love is not that bad
Seeing Christ as light like the one time you had
One lost coin, still searching. How his love is reaching.
His love's reaching.
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The melody of this song is really really pretty. And your voice matches this song perfectly. Some really interesting melodies here. Lyrically speaking, I was thinking it would be neat to stay with the searching concept and keep it positive instead of talk of hypocrites and such.
“Once saw Christ in a light of love
Something changed, I no longer once was
Like one lost coin, he searches for you
Like precious gold, his heart reaches for you”
Not great lyrics but I like the whole searching for a coin thing and wanted to write about that a little.
January 23, 2018
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That is beautiful. My family is atheist and hipocrites are part of the reason. However, I like that idea of precious gold. I will definitely play around with it. Thank you.
January 23, 2018
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The melody of this song is really really pretty. And your voice matches this song perfectly. Some really interesting melodies here. Lyrically speaking, I was thinking it would be neat to stay with the searching concept and keep it positive instead of talk of hypocrites and such.
“Once saw Christ in a light of love
Something changed, I no longer once was
Like one lost coin, he searches for you
Like precious gold, his heart reaches for you”
Not great lyrics but I like the whole searching for a coin thing and wanted to write about that a little.
January 23, 2018
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