A story about time `moving on` whether in relationships or different seasons
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Beautiful. For some reason I couldn’t help but to think that this would be cool to break out in an EDM track. After the first two lines. For me that would have been cool. For some reason I kept thinking POP song. Not sure why. Just felt that.
My other advice is to not post your lyrics in all caps. That made it more difficult to read. 
Keep up the great work.
January 22, 2018
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Hi Brandon, many thanks for your feedback and really pleased that you like the song.
Regards Barry
January 22, 2018
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CHANGING TIMES
THE WIND TAKES ALL THE LEAVES, THAT FALL SO ENDLESSLY
THE SEASONS COME AND GO, AND WHAT WILL BE WILL BE
BUT ALL THE TIME THE CLOCK IS MOVING ON AND ON
AND LIFE IS CHANGING LEAVING TIMES THAT NOW ARE GONE
I REMEMBER WHEN YOUR HAND WAS ALWAYS SOFT AND WARM
SEEMS THOSE DAYS SOMEHOW REMIND ME OF A PAGE THAT`S TORN
BUT WE CAN`T GO BACK TO WHAT WE HAD TO US IT WAS NO GOOD
IT JUST COULDN`T WORK WE BOTH KNEW THEN IT NEVER EVER COULD
BUT STILL, I MISS ALL THOSE DAYS THAT YOU LIT UP IN YOUR OWN WAY
AND KNOW I`LL ALWAYS REMEMBER THOSE THINGS YOU USED TO SAY
AND ALL AROUND THERE`S GOLDEN LEAVES ON THE GROUND
AND LIFE IS CHANGING, CHANGING, CHANGING, CHANGING
WHILE FOR US TWO THERE`S ONLY EMPTINESS AROUND
AND LIFE IS CHANGING, CHANGING, CHANGING, CHANGING
AND WE CAN`T GO BACK TO WHAT WE HAD TO US IT WAS NO GOOD
IT JUST COULDN`T WORK WE BOTH KNOW NOW IT NEVER EVER COULD
BUT STILL, I MISS ALL THOSE DAYS THAT YOU LIT UP IN YOUR OWN WAY
AND KNOW I`LL ALWAYS REMEMBER THOSE THINGS YOU USED TO SAY
AND THE LEAVES WILL COME BACK AGAIN IN ANOTHER SEASONS SHOW
AS IN TIME WE`LL FIND HAPPINESS UNLIKE WHERE WE ARE NOW
CHANGING TIMES
THE WIND TAKES ALL THE LEAVES, THAT FALL SO ENDLESSLY
THE SEASONS COME AND GO, AND WHAT WILL BE WILL BE
BUT ALL THE TIME THE CLOCK IS MOVING ON AND ON
AND LIFE IS CHANGING LEAVING TIMES THAT NOW ARE GONE
I REMEMBER WHEN YOUR HAND WAS ALWAYS SOFT AND WARM
SEEMS THOSE DAYS SOMEHOW REMIND ME OF A PAGE THAT`S TORN
BUT WE CAN`T GO BACK TO WHAT WE HAD TO US IT WAS NO GOOD
IT JUST COULDN`T WORK WE BOTH KNEW THEN IT NEVER EVER COULD
BUT STILL I MISS ALL THOSE DAYS THAT YOU LIT UP IN YOUR OWN WAY
AND KNOW I`LL ALWAYS REMEMBER THOSE THINGS YOU USED TO SAY
AND ALL AROUND THERE`S GOLDEN LEAVES ON THE GROUND
AND LIFE IS CHANGING, CHANGING, CHANGING, CHANGING
WHILE FOR US TWO THERE`S ONLY EMPTINESS AROUND
AND LIFE IS CHANGING, CHANGING, CHANGING, CHANGING
AND WE CAN`T GO BACK TO WHAT WE HAD TO US IT WAS NO GOOD
IT JUST COULDN`T WORK WE BOTH KNOW NOW IT NEVER EVER COULD
BUT STILL, I MISS ALL THOSE DAYS THAT YOU LIT UP IN YOUR OWN WAY
AND KNOW I`LL ALWAYS REMEMBER THOSE THINGS YOU USED TO SAY
AND THE LEAVES WILL COME BACK AGAIN IN ANOTHER SEASONS SHOW
AS IN TIME WE`LL FIND HAPPINESS UNLIKE WHERE WE ARE NOW
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Beautiful. For some reason I couldn’t help but to think that this would be cool to break out in an EDM track. After the first two lines. For me that would have been cool. For some reason I kept thinking POP song. Not sure why. Just felt that.
My other advice is to not post your lyrics in all caps. That made it more difficult to read. Keep up the great work.
January 22, 2018
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Hi Brandon, many thanks for your feedback and really pleased that you like the song.
Regards Barry
January 22, 2018
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Sentimental beauty! I really enjoyed listening.
January 19, 2018
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