A guy pleads with his girl to "have a heart", let it go, there are more important things in life.
any constructive feedback welcomed
I kinda was left wondering what he did also. I mean I am sure it’s the ole insert ur own problem here lol. I like it . Kinda traveling Wilburys dig it baby
January 16, 2018
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Have a heart … can you let it go, baby?
Let’s not start: there’s nowhere to go, baby.
Easy does it, we’ve got to rise above it
Take a break, my friend, leave it alone.
What can you do? What’s done is done, baby.
No time to cry: we’ve got to live, baby.
Take the time to share it, we’ve got to grin and bear it.
What else can we do, baby? What else can we do?
Without you, I’m such a hollow tree, baby
I am a violin that has no string,
I am the color blue without the sky, baby
I’m such a lonely guy
So, have a heart. Can you let it go, baby?
Let’s not start. There’s nowhere to go, baby.
Easy does it, we’ve got to rise above it
Take a break, my friend, Leave it alone.
Without you, I’m such a hollow tree, baby
I am a violin that has no string
I am the color blue, without the sky, baby
I’m such a lonely guy
Have a heart. Can you let it go, baby?
Let’s not start. There’s nowhere to go, baby.
Easy does it, we’ve got to rise above it
Take a break, my friend, Leave it alone.
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Love the sound and vibe to this! My personal reaction to it was that it left me wondering just what he (the singer) had done… I guess whether I am sympathetic to him depends on just how extreme his misdemeanor was! Even if it was mentioned once, then I’d know what he was pleading for mercy from 
I really like the “I’m such a hollow tree” and “the color blue without the sky” (though I did want the violin to have no strings rather than just no string 
)
TY for sharing, and looking forward to hearing more!
January 15, 2018
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I kinda was left wondering what he did also. I mean I am sure it’s the ole insert ur own problem here lol. I like it . Kinda traveling Wilburys dig it baby
January 16, 2018
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Tommy Grimes III
Love the sound and vibe to this! My personal reaction to it was that it left me wondering just what he (the singer) had done… I guess whether I am sympathetic to him depends on just how extreme his misdemeanor was! Even if it was mentioned once, then I’d know what he was pleading for mercy from
I really like the “I’m such a hollow tree” and “the color blue without the sky” (though I did want the violin to have no strings rather than just no string
)
TY for sharing, and looking forward to hearing more!
January 15, 2018
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