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Hey, Happy Ron! Thanks for sharing your song. I like the vibe of the song/production… though it’s kinda creepy. Almost expect him to stalk her and leave her in dead in an alley- another twist on “cold stranger.” I mean, I’m glad you didn’t go there, but I still get that really ominous vibe.
But it’s cool.
November 13, 2017
Yeah, kinda trippy. Not what I’d expect from you, but that’s what makes it kinda cool. I could see it in a movie or documentary. It’s kind of surreal and like Mr. Baxter said, “ominous”. So glad to see you on Frettie. 
May 16, 2018
Thanks. It’s meant to be more about desperate loneliness but I guess that could lead to more sinister stuff, but not from me. 
The video is a bit more ominous.
May 16, 2018
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COLD STRANGER
by HappyRon
Cold stranger, don’t leave me alone
Cold stranger, come be my home.
Warm me with your hidden heart.
It must be there - hidding in the dark.
Cold stranger, don't leave me alone
Cold stranger, is that a smile?
Cold strange, that's not your style
Did you make a kindly turn
Or was it Slyly meant to burn
Cold stranger, I saw a smile.
Cold stranger, am I naive?
Cold stranger, I don't want to leave
My body uses my brain
To make me go back again
Cold stranger, I want to believe
Cold stranger, I head for the door
Cold stranger, say you want more
Your lizard skin scrapes my soul
I only came to rock and roll
Cold stranger, I'm closing the door
Cold stranger, the warmth has left me.
Cold stranger, I don't like what I see
I've never felt so aloof
Or convinced myself that I'm bulletproof
Cold stranger, you took it from me
Cold stranger, I feel so alone
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Hey, Happy Ron! Thanks for sharing your song. I like the vibe of the song/production… though it’s kinda creepy. Almost expect him to stalk her and leave her in dead in an alley- another twist on “cold stranger.” I mean, I’m glad you didn’t go there, but I still get that really ominous vibe.
But it’s cool.
November 13, 2017
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Yeah, kinda trippy. Not what I’d expect from you, but that’s what makes it kinda cool. I could see it in a movie or documentary. It’s kind of surreal and like Mr. Baxter said, “ominous”. So glad to see you on Frettie.
May 16, 2018
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Thanks. It’s meant to be more about desperate loneliness but I guess that could lead to more sinister stuff, but not from me.
The video is a bit more ominous.
May 16, 2018
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November 09, 2017
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