He's losing her, but - you know - if no one actually says it, then it's probably not true. This is probably the closest I've ever gotten to writing a pop song.
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I Don’t Want to Hear It
I guess I knew it would end up like this
You left a lot of signs kinda hard to miss
Like last night - you left me standing there
All alone puckered up and only kissing air
(chorus)
I don’t want to hear it
What you’re gonna say
I don’t want to hear it
No rejection today
Don’t wanna go down that road
Kick my heart into emotional overload
I don’t want to hear it today
It was one-sided I’m forced to confess
You had a roving eye I had the stress
But the worst thing you said was that you cared for me
Then I found your hand on my best friend’s knee
(Repeat Chorus)
(bridge)
I need to make myself a little stronger
Truth is I’m stallin’ for 24 hours longer
You asked me here to our favorite cafe
You’re gonna drop the bomb & blow my heart away
I’m waiting for those 5 words that really cut
I love you Honey - but
(Repeat Chorus)
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