Overall, the musical feel fits well with the them The first/third verse lyrics feel a little redundant with all of the miss/ings. Also, I think there’s too much time between some of the lines. The chorus lyrics and melody flow much better. Nice work.
Adam Brinckerhoff gave feedback on On Nights Like This
Overall, the musical feel fits well with the them The first/third verse lyrics feel a little redundant with all of the miss/ings. Also, I think there’s too much time between some of the lines. The chorus lyrics and melody flow much better. Nice work.